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Thursday, 31 March 2016

camp writing

Description: It was my best piece of writing that I have done this term and it was my favourite piece of writing.
I wrote about camp gone wrong.

I was having the best day of my life because I was with my classmates on a dirty but rather peaceful river. I was afraid to go in the dirty water but my team screamed out to me in desperate need. I had no time so I dived in with my long loose baggy pants on. Not only did I have my pants on but I still has my sweatshirt on.
I dived into the water it was so freezing cold. It feel like ice and I was covered in goose bumps. I swam over to the raft and jumped on. When I got to my towel I sprinted back to camp. I ran to the showers and I turn it on hot. This day can not get any worse. Then the shower turned cold. Do you think your camp can get any worse?

feedback: you did really well at making your writing interesting and funny to read.

feedforward: next time you could make your describetion more detailed.

Tuesday, 22 March 2016


Active listening is looking at the person. You are not doing something else and your belly button is facing the person that is talk. You are letting people play in your games and you are sharing the balls or what ever you are playing with. All the time you should do Active listening not only a school but at home and at work is well.

Friday, 18 March 2016

My Family Tree

Every Monday afternoon we have been doing our family tree. Poutama had a couple of weeks to get it    done. In my family tree I got up to great great grandmas and grandpa's. Mum and Dad gave me a little bit of help, especially with all the Great Grandparents. While I was doing the family tree I learnt some new Maori words like Matua for Uncle and Whaea for Aunty. Our family is very large and it was really hard to get the whole family tree completed.

Tuesday, 15 March 2016

Camp portfolio post

We went to El Rancho. El Rancho is in Waikanae. To get to Waikanae it take about hour an a bit. But it was with the dive when we got there. When we got to El Rancho the girls got there bags and got there cabins reedy for to night. When the girls we doing that the boys did discover El Rancho. Through the week we did ten activities. I had lots of fun.

   Feedback: your pictures are clear and they have been explained it well.
   Feedforward: you might won't to do it in pen so it can be a bit more clear.

Thursday, 3 March 2016

One word 2016 eportfolio post

Description: Poutama got a word to focus on. My one word is TRUSt. Then we did tweet on twitter we wrote how our one word is going to help us. After we did our tweet we made some art. 

Feedback/Feedforward: Sophie you did really well but you could maybe space out your letters a bit more and add a bit more detail and decoration but it is really cool!-Bella M

Evaluation: I really like my art. I am happy will my art. My one word was hard because you had to get something you needed to focus on fo the year. 

Camp goal

There's are my camp gaols.